Imperfect grammar In Dialogue -my grammar isn’t always fantastic when i’m talking to someone .sometimes seeing little grammar mistakes in character dialogue makes it feel more real.
character ticks -characters who have a chronic cough or who have a bad habit of chewing their nails or popping their knuckles it fleshes them out.
characters with actual passion -i love seeing a character get really excited about something they are passionate about and when another character shuts them down on that subject it’s heart breaking.i can totally relate
puns and stupid jokes in first person narration -don’t tell me me that you never made a little joke to yourself and then laughed at it .i think its cute.
Random easter eggs in books- an author’s favorite recipe a trivia Fact that they are throwing in just because,things that may relate to the plot but are also little surprise for the reader
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